Week 8 comments and feedback

1. I have enjoyed the comments I have been receiving. The comments I enjoy the most are the ones that actually give me feedback to fix my paper instead of just telling me how much they like my story.

2. I would say I am giving pretty good comments. I try to tell them what I like about their story and then try and tell them one thing they could fix.

3. I haven't really gotten to know anyone through this class other than reading their introductions.

4. I might add a couple more pictures on my comment wall so it isn't so bland.

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I chose this picture because I actually enjoy the comments that point out errors so I can make my story better.

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Introduction to Carver's life

Hi, I'm Carver Ramey and I am currently a junior here at OU. My major is Finance and I would say the coolest part of my major is I got to go study abroad last summer and take a finance and accounting class. The best class I took last semester would be Philosophy because I was able to work ahead and complete the course two weeks before it was due. After I graduate from OU I want to go to work somewhere in the real estate field. This summer I have an internship at a commercial real estate firm in Dallas which I am very excited about. If for some reason I don't enjoy real estate I will probably try and go to law school after graduating from OU. My favorite hobby of mine is skiing. I usually go skiing once or twice a year and I have been doing that for the past 15 years whether it's with my parents or a group of friends. To make sure I keep this streak up every summer I work and save up so I can afford to go. This winter break I went to Crested Butte with a couple of my friend...

Week 12 Reading: Ancestors of Rama

King Dipla Rama'a's great great grandfather wasn't able to have children with his wife. He consults a sage and she tells him that he can with some other woman but Dipla is always too distracted with his young wife that he gives the other woman no attention. The Sage tests Dipla by putting a tiger to attack the woman he could have kids with to see what Dipla does. Dipla sacrifices his body to the tiger and so the sage grants him a child. Dipla gives birth to his son Raghu. When Raghu becomes older Dipla tells him he needs to protect a horse from being taken. Indra whos mad at Raghu turns invisible and tries to take the horse but Raghu stops her and Indra rewards him. Dipla makes him king after. Later on, the kings threaten Raghu so he decided to take over the world and succeeds he then disrupts the wealth back to the kings. A sage arrives after the wealth has been distributed to ask for a massive sum to pay his teacher. Raghu realizes he will have to get the wealth from Kube...

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